CARTOGRAPHY
an exquisite corpse between
Mimi & Nathan
I started the poem, Nathan has finished without knowing the previous part.
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Compass thinking pronounces
the north is always the steer
it forgets the labyrinth on the west
or the sun shining on the east
but to the south,
on its sense and non sense
life randomly exists over the corners
and the square makes circular love
To me, I had seen no contours
no wondrous squiggles to take back
my dissonant laughter.
all these confused elements
of the ethereal mind-map.
so, let me see past
those paint-drop trees
let me see into your cartography
(sept08)
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2 comments:
I have seem painters playing exquisite corpse, but it my first time with poems. It is nice! Congratulation for you, Mimi, and your friend Nathan
Dave
and it is so lovely to play it! you should try it, dave, maybe in the future?
lovel
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